SALL said:neeche jani dada ki dokannnnnnnn
uppper rozi ka makaaaannnnnnnnnn
dada making patti wala paaannnnn
for rozi jii s abba jaaannnnnnnn
wah wahhhhhhhhh
kya baat hai re sallll teri
adaab arz hai
new_beau said:Good Poem.. Butt Needs a WAZAN ...Keep it up..and U could be good Poet..
jani420 said:Qaid ka nishan hai tu
Iqbal ki shaan hai tu
Meri pehchan hai tu
Kiya keroun tareef teri
Tu hi to hai maa meri
Terey liey hazir hai jaan meri
Har jawan tera rakhwala hai
Tu hi to humari aankh ka tara hai
Tera har manzar kitna pyara hai
Shaheedoun ke lahoo ne likhi tareekh teri
Qurbanioun se mili hai yeh azadi meri
Aur kiya keroun tareef teri
Kasam khuda ki meri jaan hai tu
Merey watan mera Iman hai tu
Is dil mein hai sir tu tu tuhi tu
jupiterblue said:uhhuuyyyy nice poem??
leave4lives said:yeh dil mange more......
jani420 said:
leave4lives said:
Mani said:er...arent u suppose to wai t till someone actually tells u that they actually wanna see U/
?